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Evan
The message you guys were trying to get across was nice. I wish there was more imagery it felt like I was reading along to an audio book. Good work
Oscar
thanks
Carlos
The visuals can be improved but the story or message is nice
David
Your story has a very nice message, I love the idea of helping others and being more kind in general. You have fantastic drawings and nice artwork!
Oscar
thanks
Jan Carlo
I liked the story and message but the addition of visuals could enhance it
Sophia Rose Imelda
The audio and visuals could be improved on. Other than that, nice video
Gina
While the story seemed interesting, it was hard to follow because of the lack of visuals. Would love to see more of this story in an animated form!
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helping others
moral is if you help other then they will also help you
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
Special Thanks:
Team:
Oscar and Elizabeth
Elizabeth, Oscar
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