Ella

This was a very nice story I enjoyed the art!

Olivia

I love this story! It made me feel hopeful, and i like the moral about not giving up

Mason

I kinda like this story, but why does the design of the plant boy keep changing? and I do agree with the moral to never give because I did feel that.

Dylan

This made me feel determined to something I want to see happen. I was going to say that the moral was that determination is the key to success but instead it is to not give up.

Jack

The story left me feeling hopeful and the artwork was good. In the future, if you could make the audio clearer it would make the story a little easier to follow. Also, the leaf looking for the resources part seems a little drawn out. I am looking forward to seeing your group's final short.

Haley

the mood was sad in the start and towards the end it was like never give up. I think our story is good!

Amy

I like the message that hardship and helping each other brings people together. The middle is a little out of order - he decays and then he's green again and then decays again and chips away. Also, his arms re-appear in a picture after they've fallen off. The fact that the friend is a cactus seems unrealistic to me because a cactus doesn't need water - why did you choose this? How would this friend know where to take him to save him? Making your story very consistent and in an order that makes sense would help it a lot!

Jak

I think the emotion of this story is emotional. I think it drags on too much and starts get boring. I think the moral of the story is to never give up.

Greer

I like your story, and I think your team's drawings are really engaging! If I had to change something, I would say that the silences between sentences are slightly too long. I think if you make those pauses shorter it will make the story easier to follow.

Marc

very cool leaf I like them a lot

Tanner (1 like)

I must say this story made me smile ear to ear and i don't know if it was the character design or the way the leaf look but i couldn't help but feel for him but also was quite just filled with joy looking at this wonderful leaf on adventure of not giving up hope so keep it up yalll!