Taylor

I like the drawing

Story

Your art and sound affects are fantastic! Your voice acting was great too. I was super confused on what was happening right before act 2, and the ending confused me a lot, but otherwise I really, really, liked it.

Mya

Gabriella, our video editor, got confused on where each picture was supposed to go and accidentally placed some images out of order. She's currently working on fixing this, and hopefully then the story will make a lot more sense.

Alejandro

love the art

Erik

This story is very creative. However, I have to wonder, what was the MC (main character) running from? Why are the Grimm's not to be trusted? I also feel that the sequence of the cat(Yokai?) could have been different to fit the story. Like the MC could have followed the cat and it ended up at the market place. The other character(the green one) was unnecessary to have. The visuals and dialogue were good, you could have talked with a lot more character to bring them to life. Very nice.

Mya

yeah, the images were put out of order in several places. working on fixing that right now

Elina

I really like the idea of having a real name and a nickname and I loved the dialogue. I was a little confused on what was going on in the middle of the story though.