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Jackie
Hi Brother Jacob, good job in participating in Xperiential & putting together a good story idea. I loved your drawings & use of color. I also liked that you had no dialog. The only thing I would add, would be to have the music change or stop all together at the car scene. Adding some walking & car sounds would also be a nice addition. Hope you are doing well. Kind regards & blessings from our Ohana to you, jAckie
Adair
Love the illustrations! I would love to know more and love the gecko as a character !!
Yenny
i think is a good star!, and i love all the drawings so far, i wonder what the little boy has to learn at the end of the story. Anyways i would like to see more ;( but i hope you keep up with the story! It has a lot of potential.
James
I like the idea, I think as a boy I wanted to fly too... I think you had room to expand and build more to add a little more detail. I hope you and your team continue the story after the class. Thanks for being apart of the class
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