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Jack
I think that the plot is good but the audio is very inconsistent and, as a result, the story is confusing. If you add a voice-over, over the entire thing, I think that it will make the short stronger but good work.
Cooper
I think the audio could use some change, because the narration is not in certain parts of the story which takes away from the story
Kyla
I like the conflict in your story. I like the message at the end. The sound kept cutting out though. I like how you used the storyboard.
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Gold rush
It is about a miner and his journey
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
Special Thanks:
Team:
Noah,Charles
Charles, Noah
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