Eli

I really like the music at the beginning and all of the sound effects. The fades in and out on the music are a bit abrupt and some of the sounds effects are a bit too loud compared the to audio though. Also I found the story a bit hard to follow with mostly just music and sound effects. I don't think you necessarily need more narration but switching up what sound effects or music you use to fit the mood might make it a bit stronger. Also when using music it can be important to consider where you are in the music when it starts and stops because sometimes the music stops abruptly just as it hits a high energy moment. Overall I really like the story and all of the visuals and it is very well put together.

Jak

I like the use of sounds to tell what is happening. I was still confused on the act 2 though. A bit of voiceover would still help.

Romel

its a good story but think it needs actual words or a natorator

Teagan

Amazing!

Manea-Joy

More talking on the story would be great but other then that the art and ur character and the music was awesome

Abigail

Nice story! I liked the addition of sound effects, but I think they were a little loud at times in comparison to the talking bits. Still though, great work!

Makena

I love the different varieties of images, sound effects and music!Great work

Nancy (1 like)

I liked the story. I love her name. I think a bit of dialogue or more narration might have made the plot a bit more clear. The moral is a good one.