Ian

I am mixed on my opinion about the lack of narration. This would be stronger if the aftermath of the tsunami was shown. The eerie music was a great addition. Where did the gold go?

Ian

*Where did the gold go after the tsunami?

Marc

I like the music

Emma

I liked how there wasn’t much narration and you could tell what was going on through the images which were shown at good times. The music definitely helped add feeling to the story. I’m confused on how they saw the tsunami if they were underground mining.

Angel

I like the art

Sam

I really like the audio choice, it adds the tone to the theme, I'm confused how they saw the tsunami underground.

Story

Not bad! I liked your music choice a lot. My best suggestion would be to do away with narration completely, your story made sense and the parts you narrated seemed like they could've been replaced with sound effects.

Ke'ala

This submission’s audio really helped to bring the story to life. I actually felt like I was sucked into an intense scene. I think I got the gist of what was happening, however, I am a little lost. Correct me if I am wrong but are the miners digging their way out of somewhere?

Kylie

I like the idea of your story, but I got really confused at the end, I lost track of what was happening. I really like your sound effects, and music. Next time I would try not using the storyboard outline, and using actual 8 by 11 paper. I would also like to see some color next time.