Taylor

I like the drawings and the stuff

Mira

I liked the story a lot! Something I'd love to see would different types of panels maybe so we could see more angles. Overall though I think it was a nice and cute story.

Malia

Nice job with pictures. I was really intrigued by the story! Something that could improve is the volume. It is a little bit muffled and hard to hear. Maybe try to lengthen the video abit and add some more attention catching details. The pictures were a little bit confusing such as the first one... I can't tell if the two animals are on a sidewalk or they are in the air or what.

Julian

good story

Henry

Good voice over, good story. One problem is that there doesn’t seem to be a middle to the story.

Solomon

I really like the direction that the story took towards the middle, with the dogs telling Kiki Maumau that even if his caretakers don’t seem like they care for him, they love no matter what. I feel like there could’ve been some more tension between the dogs and the main character, but that’s just me.