Marlene

it seems that you guys put alot of effort into this, good job on finishing your boards, how ever, I do have similar critiques to Ben and Joaquin where the story is very difficult to follow because it does jump around quite a bit in time and there isnt much of a continuous story without a lesson or key idea to follow. the sound effects also tended to be too loud at some points and there wasnt much to take from the story. Even with all this, you all should pat yourselves on the back for seeing this through to the end!

Ben

I didn't hate this story, far from it, I was just a bit confused by it. I had a hard time figuring out what was going on, and I didn't feel a clear sense of direction. But it's still good despite all the issues present.

Alejandro

nice

Carlos

Needs a better understanding on what is happening

Edna

I like the fact that the drawings are colored and the sound effects are good too. It was just that the story was hard to understand.

Joaquin

the drawings are very amateur but I like that it is painted. The music doesnt fit very well but I like the sound effects, and the story is difficult to understand (for me) but I really like that you used voice acting.