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Olivia (1 like)
Incredible! I love the development of your characters with the use of interesting voices in the voiceover instead of having a narrator! These two characters are so iconic! It was a little unclear where their mom was. Since the older one is doing so much work, it seems as though the mother is irrelevant in their lives as if she doesn't live with them.
Sanne
Thank you for your lovely comment! (Also to answer your question: The mom is mostly just busy at work and comes home after they go to bed. This was hinted at in lines by Willow. I hope that helps clear stuff up. Also it is kinda like she doesn't live with them since she is always home late and leaving early. )
Tyler
Really good idea, great movie with good voiceovers and drawing! I might make it a little bit shorter.
Sanne
Thank you for commenting!
Mónica
I really like the story, and the character design :)
Sanne
Thank you!
Kylie
A great story line, and a great movie, but it is really long. I would highly suggest making it a little shorter next time.
Sanne
Thank you for commenting !
Makena
Beautiful artwork and detailed story telling!! Amazing work:D
Sanne
Thank you so much!
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Living Room
This is a story about a ten year old girl named Griffin and her older sister Willow.They live a pretty normal life except for one thing...things in their house are constantly disappearing. Willow blames Griffin but Griffin denies doing anything! Is Griffin telling the truth? Could there be another reason things keep disappearing? And could these disappearances have anything to do with the mysterious living room?
Thank you to all of our family and friends that helped us along the way! We could not have done this without you! We appreciate all of the help and support you gave us!
Also a special thanks to Stone S. and Gabrielle deBarros for helping bring our characters to life!
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Team:
CottonCandyCucumbers
Angela, Kyla, Sanne
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