Colin

Nice detail and good story

Troy

I thought the amount of detail was very good

Olivia

Incredible! Your drawing and story/narration were very interesting! I loved the ending. The story was a little unclear only when it got to the clone section because it seemed as though this concept of clones had come out of nowhere. I would have loved to see Audrey's opinion on Hunter's decisions right after the "one year later" section.

Sugey

This would be great for kids and the story was clear and I love the drawings

Quang Khai

it is really good

Julian

I really liked the character building and art direction. I found some of the narration a little distracting. I would suggest taking a more dialogue centric approach.

Alejandro

epic story

Sam

The character design and background is very well done, I think the narration could use some improvement. Other than that it is really well done!

Sophia Rose Imelda

Nice backstory! However, I would improve on the narration. Overall, I love the characterization

Eamon

I would elaborate more on the story and the events.

The drawings are very well done.

Bryce

The art is very good but the storyline was a little difficult to follow though. I felt like too many things were happening, maybe focus on one superhero trope.

Makena

I love the use of character interaction within your story. Amazing work!