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Grace

Great job! I love the drawings; however, some of them could use a little more explanation and I got lost in between. Other than that, amazing job overall!

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Olivia

Incredible! I loved your incorporation of sounds to go alongside the visuals. It really kept me interested and excited to see what was going to happen next! wish the voiceover glitched and stopped at certain times which may have just been my computer, but it was a bit distracting.

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Tanner

This video was something intresting i'd must say. Not much talking yet threw the visual i could tell a story being told and it has much potiential. Y'all did an amaziing job and i love what you've done. you guys should be proud!

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Alejandro

love the sounds

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Dara

Love the sound affects, and how you focus on the animal. Great job

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Erik

The visual story telling was nice, I like how it focuses on an animal rather than the humans (as most tales do). However I have to wonder, why were those hunters looking for dogs? What was the interaction with the squirrel about? And how did Lulu escape? The music mixing was excellent. However, I believe that your team should have put much more narration in the story because some of the visual context was hard to follow. Really nice story.

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Hazel

I enjoyed your use audio, and visuals!

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Lulus adventure

Final project

This is where the special thanks would go!  I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.

Special Thanks:

Team:
Team 23

Camden, Mataya, Tiffany

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