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Patrick

WOW!!! Just wow. I loved that this story took a simple and relatable experience – phone usage – and turned it into the backdrop for a masterpiece. There's so much more to this story than initially meets the eye. While the overall moral of the story communicates the importance of healthy habits, the story touches on hot political topics in today's America. Some may think that having the phone services unionize is too bold of a choice but I respect it. You clearly had messages about worker's rights embedded deeply within this storyboard. Personally, I think the theme came across perfectly. It's a very strong contender.

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Romel

good details, but i think it might need more details on the background

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Carlos

I like the drawing.. nice :)))

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Abigail

the drawings are amazing, i love how this went.

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Jesse

Cool drawings

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Act 1, 2, and 3

Here is the final Act 1, 2, and 3 of our story.

Special Thanks:

Team:
Rylee W. Hannah K. Riley Z. Kiara H

Hannah, Kiara, Riley, Rylee

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