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Alejandro
epic plot
Jak
There doesn't seem to be a more compelling story ark. Some of the sound effects and music feels forced. You should use less.
Ricardo
It's a little confusing, maybe just file it down a bit
Lila
I like the story but what is wrong with him? I think the story is too short and too many sound effects.
Samantha
The story idea is interesting, but I’m a bit confused on what is happening
Kylie
I like the idea of the story, but I am confused, what is wrong with him? What is his backstory? It is also very short, and I think next time you need to add some more miner beats. I love your music, and sound effects though! I also like how many pictures there are. I do think you need some more narration though.
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