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Katie
I really love this idea, it's very unique and the main character seems likable. I understood the story clearly until the bed scene, then I got a little confused by the ending. It was pleasant and the music was a good choice
Miriam
I like the story and the drawings! In my opinion it is an excellent script and I really like the animatic. What I'm not very clear about is why the protagonist clerk is crying at bedtime. Is it because she is not going to see her ghost friends? Or is it because she is sorry for being so mean? I want to see the full short film.
Yenny
Hello there! I love all the drawings at the storyboard and the SFX that you put! i looks you put a lot of efford. i like the changes that the protagonist took in the story, but the final was kind of confusing for me i didnt understand that well, like this climax point. But i think is a good job!
Emma
I thing the idea of having a antique shop owner be able to see the dead is very unique. Your boards, acting, and sound effects are great. I am slightly confused at the end on how she is able to see the ghosts again. Overall, good work!
Álvaro
Hello Sam!! Your story is very imaginative!! I liked how she wanted to spend her time with the Dead, as the kept her in good company. And the fact she could only see them because of the Customer's mirror, that's really a great detail!! I liked it. But in the end..Did she really died? Good job!! Kudos!!
Francisco (1 like)
Really well done! I like how you developed the protagonist in such few sequences (that is remarkable). Love the art as well :)
Samantha
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I would've liked to lengthen it in a couple of areas but otherwise I'm happy with the storytelling :)
Samantha
Thank you!
Enkhee (1 like)
Nice! I am happy in the end the main character has turned into her cheerful self.
Good job!
Samantha
I'm glad you liked the character development and how it ended because I had a different ending in mind for most of the course!
Samantha
Thanks! :)
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The Antique Store
An antique store owner acquires the ability to see ghosts and forms an unlikely friendship with the spirits of the dead; they help her to feel more fulfilled in the world of the living. She will never view life the same way again; but maybe that's a good thing?
I'd like to express my thanks for the opportunity to learn and be a part of this fantastic course. The wealth of knowledge and the inspiring people that have been on this course (both teachers and students) have made this an invaluable experience for me.
I also must acknowledge my family, friends and other people close to me because they've supported me in being able to do this course. It's not always easy to set aside time for this with other life commitments and there's been a few late nights because of it! But these special people know how much I wanted to make the most of this opportunity - so a big thanks to them all for sure!
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Samantha McIntyre
Samantha
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