Pengyu

I really like the detailed text above each drawing, the idea of connecting unfinished relationships across generations, and the use of color in every single of the drawing.

Finn

I feel like the climax could use some work, the problem was too easily solved.

Aneiss

great story, good explaining. nice job

Abigail

Good story! One thing that confused me, though, is why no one has tried this previously. I think maybe you could've included things like stories of failed attempts from other family members to clear their family's name. I liked the ending. Good work!

Makena

I love how clear this story was!!! Great work:D