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Grace
Great ideas! Try to find ways to make it more colorful and engaging. Amazing effort overall!
Mattie
The music really added to the story and the audio was really great! The story could have used more detail though, I found it to be a little vague. Good job.
Alan
I like the overall story and idea of it and I also like the video transitions. But the video needs color.
Concepcion
good story
MacKenzie
the drawings could use a little work but the music was great!
Joaquin
the drawings are very amateur, but also nice. The country music fits perfectly and I like the way the story is told
Eamon
I think that the story has potential to be a great movie, but currently it could use some elaboration.
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Final Story
Indian War
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
Special Thanks:
Team:
Coby, Colin, Kylie
Coby, Colin, Kylie
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