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Mary
Way to go, Maddie!
Julia
Omg Maddie! It’s Julia from school. This is such a great story, could you make one about our Girl Talk friend group??? See you Monday!!! 🫠
Greer
Your artwork is really charming, and I like that you took the time to add dialogue. This is a very sweet short story!
Emma
The drawing is amazing, and the story itself is really well written, and I love the message, along with Peaches character arc. It makes for a very good story and the music and framing is well timed. Good job!
Jack (1 like)
I am impressed with everything about this story, the artwork is incredible, the plot is impeccable, and the voice acting has just the right amount of emotion so as to not distract while adding a lot of empathy to the characters. I really like that the dislike between the two main characters was built on a misunderstanding, not just one of them being good and the other evil, causing both characters to be relatable and they both have something to learn.
Andres
i like the story
Seneca
I love your art style and enjoy watching your submission every week
Bryce
Love the moral and story progression. I can totally see young children loving this
Chloe
the narration is amazing and the story is so sweet :)
Kelvin
The art is good and I like that you put effort into your character's voices.
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