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Mokihana
I loved your story and the art was very well drawn and engaging!
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I like your story it’s very clear.
Gael
Cool visuals and story!
Christian
Great art, and good story. Very easy to follow, and I was compelled the whole time. I think the ending does feel a bit rushed, but other than that, it was great.
Jose
I like the art style.
Johnathan
cool story and nice sketches
Ella
Great job! I agree with others, your story is very clear and your drawings are amazing!
Ella
I also agree that your story has great character development. Great job!
Jesse
Very cool story.
Sophia Rose Imelda
Your art style is amazing!! Your lines are so clean and I love how you drew the characters. I also love the story, and it has great potential to become a full length feature
amelia
I love your artstyle!! The story is very captivating. It reminds me of Little Witch Academia, which is one of my favorite shows!
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Hazel
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Sophia
I love the artstyle and I love the character development. I would love to see more of the world visually and her interaction with classmates after the fact.
Mónica
I really like your artwork :)
Marian
I love the art , this was fun to watch
Bryce
The art is very and their very great potential to expand the character. Great job
Chloe
the art style is lovely! the story provides a nice and thorough lore for your main character!
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Hannah's Story Reel
Once upon a time…
There was a half human, half therianthrope who possessed exceptional magical capabilities. This caught the attention of her country’s most prestigious magical academy. The staff saw the potential Pygmalion had, but were worried that her natural instincts would turn her into a destructive force, so they had her enrolled into their school.
Everyday…
She would amaze Academy teachers with her skill and talent. She was a quick learner and could easily cast spells that took great amounts of mana. Academy teachers saw a bright future ahead of her.
Until one day…
She got into a disastrous fight with several students because they despised her therianthrope ancestry. In the aftermath of the battle, 2 students had been injured, and a statue had been toppled.
Because of that…
The Academy questioned her capabilities. They began doubting whether or not she could handle her aggressive nature. As a punishment, they suspended her.
Because of that…
Her reputation worsened while she was away. Animosity towards her spread throughout the school; subsequently, her life became much more difficult.
Because of that…
She continued getting into fights and destroyed property out of anger and spite. Most of the Academy administrators were fed up and wanted her out of the school.
Until finally…
A few teachers convinced the rest to give Pygmalion one more chance. They sent her to live with a werewolf family in the hopes that they would teach her how to control her hostile nature. After several months, Pygmalion learned how to better control her emotions by learning how to channel her negative energy into something positive.
And ever since then…
Pygmalion has had no violent incidents at the academy, and has been continuing to impress the academy administration.
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