Manuela (1 like)

Hey there! Very Nice sweet story. I understood what was happening and the drawings where very nice. I liked the building at the begging and how with sound you showed that the bird was becoming a living animal. I hope he learns how to fly. Nice job!

Enkhee

Hi Manuela,

Thank you so much!

Benedict (1 like)

Great work on your drawings and shots. Though I expected a voice narration rather than just audio sounds. Anyway goodluck on your journey.

Jiwoo (1 like)

Hey Enkhee :)
Your arts are sooo pleasing to watch! Also loved your message and how you've creatively and heartwarmingly unfolded throughout your story :)

Enkhee

Thank you ☺

Armando (1 like)

Loved the story and the knowledge you have in framing, loved the frames from up high. Nice work!

Enkhee

Hi Armando,
Thank you!

Meredith (1 like)

I love the sounds in this! It reminds me of a game or one of those living story books. Also I love the ending <3

Enkhee (1 like)

Hi Mededith,

Thank you so much!

Kara (1 like)

I love your story! Your art is beautiful, and your story is very relatable filled with the longing for more. I urge you to continue and I really am so happy you chose this theme for your work. The camera positions within several of your scenes are very exciting as you take us into the story in a profound manner. Great use of perspective and character expressions. I truly thank you for sharing. :)

Enkhee (1 like)

Thank you so much! Thank you for your praise! I did enjoy your story too!

Good luck with your future projects!

Kara

Thank you! :) Same to you, and enjoy this journey!

Jasmine (1 like)

I love your drawings, they have so much charm to them! Some parts even looked like gorgeous hand drawn animation (like at the opening scene!). I could follow your story along easily, and I think using the ambient SFX was incredibly well done as well. I think I'm most impressed by your cinematography, you really have a natural senes of how to control of the camera/compositions of shots to best tell your story. You really did a great job showcasing the connection between Birdie and the albatross too, their bond comes off as very organic, and overall you have such a sweet story here. Great job!

Enkhee (1 like)

Aww 😍🤩 thank you! You're charming in every way!

Maria Teresa (1 like)

I like this story because the theme is original and sweet. the sound and sound effects are well done, are on time.

Julie (1 like)

I love the idea of a porcelain bird trying to become a real bird. I really like the friendship between the albatross and Birdie and how that aspect of the story has come along. It really makes you care more about each character and builds an emotional bond. I think the revisions have really taken your story to another level! I was able to understand your illustrations and think you did a great job of showing each aspect of the story! Bravo!!!

Enkhee (1 like)

Hi Julia,

Thank you so much, from my drawing experience I understood that fundament of visual storytelling is composition. Which is what I dream of to master.