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Madeleine
Hi Team Yearbook Fam, I liked how there is a lot of potential to grow your story. I was unclear on what your story is about and who your characters are. A suggestion I have to make your stronger stronger is to develop these two things!
Yiqiao
I think you maybe add more pages to show what you want to say
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Pixar Film
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This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
Special Thanks:
Team:
Yearbook Fam
Azeneth, Citlaly, Victor
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