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Brenda
The animations were fun to watch. I would like the story to go deeper.
Hansen (1 like)
Love the animations, very compelling. Would love to see more.
Anastasia (1 like)
I love the introduction of the characters, especially with the similar compositions! I'm proud of your progress! Keep up the great storytelling! :)
Fiona (1 like)
Haha that tooth brushing thing where the mum isn’t in the reflection is so clever! I wish I had seen more of the story. I noticed a lot of the animation is very involved. Well done for your ambition but maybe for the storyboarding stage it may help to focus more on still frames and animatics.
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I have provided Act 1 of my storyboard, which the daily occurrences of an adopted daughter and a vampire mom. Later on, the daughter gets a reminder that she is attending her 1st day of high school. Excited, she shows her mom and begs to have a total high school makeover. However not shown in Act 2, you see a montage of the daughter and mom having fun and trying new clothes. While waiting in the dressing room, the mom finally realizes that her only daughter is growing up and gets a flashback. Then in the flashback, you would see how the mother turned into a vampire and how her 1st child was taken away from her. When the flashback is over, the mom soon becomes resilient to having her daughter change before her eyes.
I would like to thank this program to be able to learn from professionals and see how they do what they do. Also, my family for their support! Also, everyone in this program and seeing their ideas and their support!
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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