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Olivia
I absolutely love your drawings and how they add but do not distract from the character complexity and storyline. I would love for you to further elaborate on the grand adventure she takes to reach the other realm. It seemed a little bit over-generalized and skipped over. When she arrives at the other realm, I feel the audience needs some clarity on the resolution between her and her friend. Why did her friend stop logging on in the first place? How would the story be different if the friend was not excited to see her?
Dylan
The drawings were good. I was confused as to what happened with her and the computer and thought it could be made clearer. A good way to make it stronger would be to zoom in on the amination so you don't show everything else on the app and its just the video being shown.
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Final Video
Week 8, final storyline.
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
Special Thanks:
Team:
Casey Jones
Casey
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