Ashton (2 likes)

Very nice animation.

Thomas (2 likes)

The voice acting is making Pixar jealous, although it can be a little hard to understand. I love all the detail it brought to your characters. Great job!

Aisa (2 likes)

i like the animation

Dara (2 likes)

I really like the voice acting and how funny it was. The characters have some funky personalities.

Manea-Joy (2 likes)

I loved the voice acting and the humour and the story was great personally I enjoyed this so much

Ke'ala (2 likes)

The voice acting really brought life to the characters. The story was also fleshed out. Others already gave the suggestions that I could think of. Good work!

Gina (3 likes)

Loved the voice acting, the characters all had such unique personalities and you were able to portray them all! My only problem is the narration, maybe instead of just saying what is happening express what is happening through the art. Otherwise, good story, I enjoyed watching her adventure :)

Makena (3 likes)

I love the use of very clear narration and different voices! Well done on creating such an amazing story 😁

Braden (3 likes)

I love the narration! It is a great idea. I do wish the aspect ratio was better, and it was a bit long, but otherwise awesome story!