Please provide final feedback to the creators of this submission below:
-
What did you like or love about this submission?
-
What did you find confusing or unclear?
-
What suggestions do you have to make it stronger?
Mason
I thought that it was a pretty good story, and was explained perfectly not unclear.
Thomas
Y'all's story is awesome, and the visuals aid that a lot. My one comment is that the audio software does the narration a disservice, and could be improved with a person narrating it as opposed to a computer.
Cam
This story was good and the pictures were very good at showing what was happening and the voice was clear. Good job!
Bryce
The story is good but its hard to appreciate the story because of the computerized voice and the music. Overall it has good story.
Makena
I love the artwork telling the story!!:D
Feedback will appear below after our team moderates them.
2) What you think about this submission:
Add New Comment
The princes and the secret
