Mya

I like your drawings but read a little more clear

Mckenna

I really like story, I think that if you cleaned up your pictures a little bit and changed your voice for what was happening I think it would be even better. I wasn't expecting the plot twist.

Ke'ala

The story was well-done and I like the narration actually. It was very engaging. I have no suggestions.

Gina

Interesting story! I love the ending and the character arc, it turned out great. It’s a shame that you couldn’t make a final reel but it’s still a great story!

Story

That was really good! I wasn't expecting that plot twist! Next time I would add music and try and do less narration, otherwise I really enjoyed. I think your film was a wonderful example that you don't need fantastic art to make a story reel, your stick figures were great!