Mokihana (1 like)

I loved the art and story! It was very engaging and the wedding officiant was hilarious.

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Thank you so much!!

Megan (1 like)

It is very good it makes a lot of sense. I think that you should make is go slower.

Abigail

Thank you for your feedback!

Rushmi (1 like)

I really like the art and the idea of a newlywed couple going on their honeymoon as ghosts! As you mentioned in the description, though, he scenes move a bit fast and there often isn't enough time to read the script.

Abigail

Yeah, sorry about that, when I revisit this I'll be sure everything is timed correctly. Thank you for your feedback!

Aisa (1 like)

very nice

Abigail

Thank you!

Ben (1 like)

This is easily the best I've seen so far. The story is compelling and creative, the ghost twist was really out-of-nowhere but welcoming, and I like the message the story conveyed. My only real complaint is the abrupt ending. The characters don't really have a conclusion, they just say come to a revelation and the video ends without any repercussions. But other than that, this is great! Well done!

Abigail

Thank you so much, this is so nice! About the ending, there was supposed to be a proper conclusion to the story, but I unfortunately ran out of time :( Thank you for your kind words and feedback, I really appreciate it!!!

Christian (1 like)

That was great! Art was good and the plot was pretty easy to follow, even if it was a bit fast. Very easy to follow the story! Also, the giant orb thing that was following them was really weird and scary, I like it.

Abigail

Thank you!

Romel (1 like)

good detail but it was going to fast that i couldn't read the sentence fully

Finn (1 like)

maybe add some audio or slow down the sub titles?

Finn (1 like)

I think it's a little hard to understand without the audio, but I think I get what the main idea for the plot is. The drawings were good and I liked the subtitles

Samanta (1 like)

the artwork is amazing and love the idea of your story

Abigail

Thank you very much!

Solomon (1 like)

I like the direction the story takes right in the middle and the overall story, as it is captivating. I feel like you could’ve added some music to the video and some of the images could’ve gone by a little slower. I still really loved it though!

Abigail

Thank you so much! And yes, I agree when it comes to the audio/timing of the images, I wish I'd had more time so I could've worked on those aspects. Thank you for your feedback!

Mónica (1 like)

I really like your artwork :)

Abigail

Thank you!