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Colin
Good story nice detail
Grace (1 like)
Great job! Very cute story and very relatable. Love it!
Ricardo (1 like)
maybe try to add some backgrounds to make it more alive
Romel (1 like)
it needs more sentence to know whats happening in the scences
Joaquin (1 like)
what a beautiful story, the storyboard was great, I loved the shades and how the music was acccompanying the ambience. To make this short stronger I would like to see better montage to make it more attractive
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Julio
Our act 1 and 2 video was, I guess you could say, an early draft of our final project now, solely because of the fact that I (the person writing this) decided to redo everything (the storyline). These past weeks have been rough for some of us coming up with our stories and I would like to thank my partner for being very optimistic and helpful with the process throughout. I, Adriann, was the artist and Clarissa was the one who helped out with the story.
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
Special Thanks:
Team:
Adriann and Clarissa
Adriann, Clarissa
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