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Ava (1 like)
The story has great animation and I like the voiceovers, great job!
Ashton (1 like)
Nice animation and story.
Max (1 like)
WOW. Absolutely blow away. The visuals, animation, sound effects, and voice over are all impeccable. I thought the story was great, but I think I would be that much better if you expanded a little more on the counts regrets and remedies. Other wise, absolutely amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jack (1 like)
This story is amazing, the animation especially but everything else about it too. Count Crocula is very relatable and I love his character arc. I think that the story would be a little stronger if you expanded on the ending a little more and showed how Count Crocula righted his wrongs but other than that your story is perfect.
Pedro (1 like)
clear coat i like it
Franklin (1 like)
i like video
David (1 like)
The animation is really good, the story could be better (The audio) otherwise everything is alright.
Theresa (1 like)
Animation great, story confusing hard to hear.
Theresa (1 like)
Animation great, story could be explained better through clearer dialogue.
Roen (1 like)
This was absolutely incredible. The voices and animation were fantastic and the way you told the story was great!
Dylan (1 like)
I thought the amination was outstanding and love the fact that I was able to understand the story although there was no narration to it. however, I was confused as to what the moral of the story is. To make it stronger I would suggest making the moral clearer. Good job.
Nikitha (1 like)
This is nice, it has funny parts at the beginning, nice animation, and a good montage of his early life. Some parts of this story went by rather fast, so I had to watch two times or three times to get a good view of what was going on. In addition, if the university was about law and the justice system, how come he continued to do wrong things? That part confused me as well. Overall great job, I like it.
Abigail (1 like)
I LOVE THIS. This was so much fun to watch, both due to the great animation and the overall story. Also, the part where he says, "Oh mom, oh dad, you would've hated to see me like this today. And I don't blame you, because I hate seeing myself like this too.", like dang, Count Crocula's going straight for the feels 😔 You can see he's done bad things (burning down the orphanage and taking people's money) but you still can't help but feel sorry for him. Also, the music was a fantastic addition. I literally have no complaints about any of this, this is fantastic, great work!!!
Amy (1 like)
The animation was great and the story of his life was told so well through pictures. I got a little confused about why he thinks that getting bit in the neck was his fault and how he will set right his wrongs, and what his wrongs were exactly - burning down the orphanage or taking money or being a vampire? The car accident went a little too fast, as did the sign with the university description on it - I had to rewind to get what happened, so I would give a little longer air time to those.
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The Story of a Reptilian Vampire
Here is the story of the life of Count Crocula, also known as George R. Cronald, as he looks back at his life and tries to figure out where it all went wrong for him.
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