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Colin
Very good story and nice pictures
Anna
This was cool! The art and initial plot was very interesting and compelling to me. However, the portrait mode, quiet, unclear, and random pauses in vocalizations, and complexities in the script made the story quite hard to follow. I suggest focusing on the foundation of your plot, and working from there, instead of adding multiple new elements. Additionally, having clearer narration would greatly improve the story.
Julian
I liked the artwork. The recording was very unclear and the story was confusing at some points. I would reccomend single images instead of a video.
Johnathan
very funny liked the art
Gavin
Always love a classic fairy tale. Character design was nice and simple, though the description was a little confusing. Overall, great job!
Chris
Hey! I loved the character design of the little monster, and the classic fairy tale elements to this story! However, I am a little unclear on some of the plot points, especially in your written description, which I think may have been due to the lack of punctuation. Overall, the characters were very sweet, and I enjoyed watching :)
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Lil monster
Once upon a Time there's a little monster the little monster love to water his wildflowers in the dark woods but the other monsters thought he was different from them because you start magic the other monsters would bully him by destroying his flowers are taking away its color and it makes a little monster sad all the time the little monster always come up with plans to try and stop them from doing that to one day he started to cry after one of his ideas didn't work to protect his flowers his tears landed on one of the flowers and it made them look black after they lose their color the little monster decided to use this years to trick the monsters it works for a good few days till rain started to set in and destroyed his plan the other monsters started to destroy his flowers once again and it made the monster break down and cry to the ground the other minds just laughed at him for how weak he is the little monster got up and left away from the other monsters after walking for hours he met elder the elder asked why you crying little monster he the little monster told the elder that he couldn't protect his flowers and he's thinks he's weak and a coward the artist thought of this and took a long hard thinking about it he gave the little monster confident speech that confidence speech helped him realize that he can do better and that confidence also gave him a part of light the little monsters used of light to revive his flowers color which made him happy again other monster saw this and wanted to try and then he taught the other monsters and they helped him get his flowers color back and they all live happily ever after.
Thank you for this long journey it was really breathtaking to watch and learn even seeing others art work is beautiful. Learning new things I never thought would be in art is interesting and a lot of inspiring things that was said was great even thought we all never saw each other face to face it was great meeting all of you.
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Aria Kina
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