Malia (1 like)

WOW! I love the drawings! The voice is so funny! The tone makes me feel like I am in the movie. Something that could be a little bit improved, is the last few scenes, they are a bit scratchy and hard to envision.

Keya

ahh thank you Malia! lol yes one of the aspects that we really wanted to convey character through was the voice acting, glad you liked it :) and thank you for your feedback about the ending!

Sam (1 like)

Amazing story and good pictures some of the charachter narration was confusing

Keya

thank you for your compliments, Sam! thank you for your feedback about the character narration- which specific parts is the narration confusing?

Mckenna (1 like)

I really like your pictures, I think you could try to make sure there is not background sounds but the music is good. I also really like how the pages flip like a book and how the voice changes for the different characters.

Keya

thank you Mckenna!! ahh yes next time we hope that there will be less background noise. i was wondering if theres a way to edit it out, do you know perhaps?

Manea-Joy (1 like)

I love the snake OMG 🤣🤣

Keya (1 like)

haha yesss Gary :))

Manea-Joy (1 like)

I love these two and the friendship they have the story was super interesting and I love the voice acting too!

Keya

thank you so much, Manea-Joy!! yess the friendship & mentoring-like relationship between our two main characters was something we tried to focus on, so glad you like it!!