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Mira
I love the art! The story was very compelling!
Bella
the story is super detailed and well thought out! also I love love love the sketches <3
Kyleigh
all the sketches are amazing! I love the character designs!
An
Amazing story, the sketches is great. It's longer than the stories that I usually criticize, which makes it much better because there is more detail. I think it would look wonderful with color.
Alejandro
love it
Franklin
i like
Theresa
This is an interesting story with clear illustrations. We really liked the hand drawn lookoing images and wish there were a lot more images.
Angel
i like the art
Dylan
I love it because of the twist.
What happened to Scarlet.
maybe have scarlet try to use the cure no to save the queen, but to save the other marine life that is also sick.
Abigail
i love the story line and the drawings
Jan Carlo
I liked how it was a happy ending and that they will continue to help people
Erik
This was nice and very creative.
Hazel
This was so good!
Brendan
Very creative! The idea is something that would be up my alley!
Makena
Incredible storytelling!!! The creativity is so inspiring 😁
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Aquiva
When a sickness breaks out on the city of Aquiva, a young girl named Viv sets out on a adventure to find the cure, Which is located on the dangerous surface, far from home...
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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Levi, Zoe
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