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Jackie (1 like)
Hello, that was a delightful story. I liked your story telling voice, as well as the voice of the girl. I was surprised at how you brought the wall to life, telling it's story. I also liked how the cat & the girl had the same color hair. It was neat to see how the three characters wove together in a sweet tale. This would make a great children's book. I wish you well in your future endeavors & hope we can all continue to grow in creativity & find ways to share & uplift the world. Kind regards from the Isles of the Sea, jAckie =)
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