Teagan

Like your story’s and pictures.

David

Good job! Nice drawing

Marco

I like the drawings

Harris

I really liked the moral of the story, i think you did a great job

Dylan

it was confusing as to what the moral is because the video ended before you had finished talking.

Teagan

I couldn't really understand but LOVED the pictures.

Hanna

I liked the world building you used in this story, as well as the unexpected decisions that were made, which made the story exciting. I would like to see why Emma gave off light and was different from the other people in the village.

Story

That was good! I actually felt like it would be a really good feature film vs a short film. I liked your use of color and your narration was good. I think music could've helped to keep me engaged but otherwise nice job.

Nancy

I liked the story spine. The idea is unique. I love the idea of a town that thinks everything is ok when it’s not! The art was good. Maybe a little but of letting the pictures telling the story instead of narration would have been nice. I like the fact that the couple got their baby.

Hellen

thanks alot