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Mckenna
Good story!
Mira
The art is adorable! I wish there was a bit more narration through to clear things up a bit. Overall I loved the music choice and the art and I could get a nice feel of what was happening regardless!
Bella
I really liked the art and the music created a nice mood! I would just add some dialogue or maybe words/captions to make the story a bit easier to follow :)
Emma
The music added a nice feel to your story to convey some form of emotion. Though the story was a bit hard to follow without dialogue, though there were parts that were fine without it, dialogue probably would’ve helped convey the message better.
Sam
I was Sort of confused about what was happening because nobody was talking. It was a good story though
Dylan
It seems to have a nice premise.
Why wasn't anyone talking.
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Final
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
Special Thanks:
Team:
Lance,Josie,Jackson,ellan
Ellan, Jackson, Josie, Lance
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