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Carol
Hi Bethany, your story is positive and very nice. Good job.
Jacquelin
Love it Bethany. Good job! Such a great message.
Hananah
I love the story, relatable and super cute.
I have a similar life experience to this young girl and love the way the story was written and the plot and repetitive failure.
It’s great!
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Dream Come True
This is a story about following your dreams and not letting rejection stop you from doing what you love.
I would like to thank the Xperiential Team for helping me out with everything along the way. They have been more than helpful and I am very grateful. And I would like to thank everyone at Pixar who took the time out of their busy schedules to teach us valuable information that I will carry with me always.
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