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Olivia
I love your artwork. Without knowing what your story was about (from the description), I would not have known her friend was dead. Adding a voiceover would make this clearer, but I also like how you expressed your story only through pictures, hinting at the overarching theme of the story that you never know what someone is going through, and how an outsider point of view only understands the complexities of something when seen more in-depth.
Jose
This has so much potential.
Ricardo
This animation is amazing!
Oscar
I love the idea and the drawings are really good. The artwork has the potential to compliment the story.
Samantha
I like the idea, and the drawings are beautiful
Arabu
I really loved the idea from reading the but not from the video because the video was not having sound so i dint understand. But i like the idea because its something you can relate to
Mónica
I really like your artwork, and i hope you can finish this story, it has potential :)
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Memories
Very incomplete story with the majority of the story missing. A girl walks through the rain as she sees her dead friend once again. Is he really there or is it all in her head. A story about terminal illness and broken promises, but very incomplete.
(Jan Carlo Bolibol, Aneiss Abdellaoui)
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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Aneiss, Jan Carlo
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