Julian

I like the draws

Franklin

is good video

Sophia (1 like)

Snakey! Very nice moral! I think more worldbuilding can attribute more to the story's atmosphere. Great story.

River (1 like)

I love Snakey. I love snakes in general. Reptiles are great. This story is great. I wish there were a few more pictures to describe more of the story so that it would be easier to follow. But other than that, it was a fun watch! Your voice acting and narration quality was definitely better than mine. And also Snakey is a great name, btw. Great job :D

Chris (1 like)

I thought this was super cute! A very simple story, but snakey was a very entertaining character. My one comment would be that the visuals were somewhat confusing, and your story was on the short side. While snakey is a very fitting name for a snake, it lacks some creativity. That said, you guys followed the story structure outline very well, and followed a classic easy to follow moral, which is great for a short film. It reminded me of the story of the ugly duckling!