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Theresa
Looks like and OK script but couldn't get a class to watch it without video images from the start. Understand that students have been under so much exhaustion and stress some work doesn't get done. Have compassion and hope they try again to get the images done.
Jack
I really like the story and I think you pull off not having much art. However, I would love some information during the climax, it felt as though it was too quick for it to be the most dramatic part of the short.
Kervin
good work
William
I like how you managed to do it with a lack of art. I think that more build up could have been added.
Solomon
I like what you were able to accomplish with your story, even with the visuals being unfinished. There could’ve been a bit more time spent in the bare, lifeless world, adding a bit more tension to the story, but I like it nonetheless.
Braden
Great cinematography and story telling! I do wish you showed more, rather than telling; for example, describing the house rather than showing it. Otherwise, good job!
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static
this was an amazing experience and a great way to really get my bearings in storyboarding! even though my final product didn’t turn out to be anything close to what i wanted it to be, i can definitely say i learned a lot and i’m excited to keep working hard with this newfound knowledge going forward! -rowan
i’d love to thank my family for encouraging me to keep working despite many setbacks, and i’d like to congratulate myself for finishing, even if i didn’t finish strong :)
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