Andres

I love music and obiously Orion Too ;)

Antonio

Sobre todo la parte donde Orion está dudando o no tiene valor antes de verdaderamente enfrentarse a la amenaza. Pasan muchas cosas pero no es muy claro que pasa. Creo que es el acto 2 en general que hay que ver paso a paso para ver que cada pedazo cuenta lo que quieres. Con mucho gusto lo podemos ver juntos si quieres después de que termine el curso. Me puedes contactar.

Ani (2 likes)

I watched the process and I just to say. Congrats, your story reel improves a lot. I love that it doesn't need dialogs. Background music helps a lot!

Álvaro (2 likes)

Hola Team Madrid!! Well Your story is indeed very Creative, and very well Developed, Reminds me in some sequences of Fantasia/ Fantasia 2000 stories by Walt Disney Studios and I love it. Also Ancient History is fascinating and i'm really happy you got inspired by it. It was enjoyable to watch and you have good knowledge of technical tools. Muy buen Trabajo a todo el equipo!! Y Suerte!

Kaitlin (4 likes)

Hi Hala Madrid Team!

I actually watched the beginning stages of this storyreel a few weeks ago and wow you've done an incredible job. I love the illustrations, music, sound effects and all. The ending scene was especially well-executed. Amazing!

Dani

Hi Kaitlin, thanks for your comments! They always encourage us to keep going. We hope that in the not too distant future this story will be made into a short film or even a movie. Who knows .... Good luck to you too.

Pietro (4 likes)

From how the title appears, to the use of music, I really love seeing how much this story has evolved. It also implies a unique use of the animation medium that's really cool and which I've never seen before. I love how the sky opens and we meet the antagonists. Going with no narration is really great, however, a few story beats were a little unclear. Luckily, I had watched your previous submissions. I encourage you to keep working on this story and turn it into a beautiful animated short film!

Dani (1 like)

Thank you Pietro, we really want to turn this story into something real. As for the technique, we would love to do it like the teacher Glenn Keane in his Duet short, with hand-drawn drawings, but to reach that level we still have a long way to go. Thanks and good luck!

William (4 likes)

Wow! Amazing use of visual and music, well done not using dialogues/words and allow the visual to speak for itself!

Dani

Thank you William. That was our intention, that the story be understood without dialogue or narrator. That way it becomes something more universal and accessible to everyone. We hope to finish it soon. Good luck!

Jianye (3 likes)

Orion became so brave because of love! I love this fantastica and original story! Great work!

Dani

Thanks Jianye! We really want to turn this story into something real and that you can see it finished. Good luck!

Francisco (2 likes)

This is epic! Really nice work. The graphics is really original and appealing. Every character feels and look so powerful and godlike. It was simple and yet so epic. Congratulations! :)

Dani (1 like)

Muchas gracias Francisco! La idea de humanizar a los dioses con sus prejuicios, miedos y fortalezas son ideales para muchas aventuras. Historias que nos han transmitido a lo largo del tiempo. Me imagino a los antiguos griegos narrando a los niños y señalando el cielo para situar en el firmamento a los inmortales héroes. Si la historia te ha enganchado, es que cumple su objetivo y estamos muy contentos. Esperamos convertirla en un cortometraje de verdad o incluso una pelicula. Quien sabe...

Kennedi (2 likes)

Constellation fight falling astroids to save the earth. Well done. Makes complete sense. Love the animated elements in your story. Also the struggle the main character goes through.

Dani

Thanks Kennedy! We are glad the good reception that the story has had and that you liked it!. In a certain way, stars and celestial bodies protect the earth thanks to their magnetic fields, diverting trajectories and gobbling up asteroids. we hope to finish the short as soon as possible. Good luck!

Elizabeth (2 likes)

Fantastic visuals! Super fun with the constellations. Clear theme!

Antonio (2 likes)

Epic! I love the mythological aspect of it, and the story of developing courage. Many of the points are not very clear. But he overall arc of the story is clear and compelling. Thanks for this one!

Dani (1 like)

Hi Antonio. Thanks for your comments! What part of the story is not clear? I would like to be able to improve it with your inputs

Taylor (2 likes)

This is an incredible story!! I liked how Orion was able to overcome his insecurities and save not just the earth but his fellow constellations. The music choices really added the emotion and hype of the moments. It's a very engaging story!!

Dani

Thanks taylor! If the story has hooked you, it is that it fulfills its objective and transmits emotions and its moral. Good luck!

Anastasia (2 likes)

STELLAR! Oh my gosh, Orion the Brave was such an incredible story! I love the art style and the music aid the thematic pacing. I'm proud of all your hard work!! :)

Dani

Thank you very much Anastasia. Our intention was that the story would be liked a lot and we believe that we have achieved it. Good luck!

Melissa (2 likes)

I think it's a fantastic idea with the constellations/characters working to protect or destroy Earth. The story is hard to follow without captions.

Dani

Thank you Melissa. In a certain way, stars and celestial bodies protect the earth thanks to their magnetic fields, diverting trajectories and gobbling up asteroids. we hope to finish the short as soon as possible. Good luck!

Yiqiao (2 likes)

The story is very good with its clear theme. I love to watch it again.

Dani

Thank you Yiqiao. We hope to make it into a short film as soon as possible. Good luck!