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Samuel
The story is interesting. The frames are well done and do a good job of showing what’s happening that it could be understood even without words. Good job!
James
Great to see this in the end, I think you and your team did a great job. I dont have anything negative, except you speeding a few spots up or cutting a little more. Overall keep doing what you love and draw everyday....Thanks for being in the class.
Kennedi
I'm so glad you added the parents coming back to see their son on his birthday! The ritual seemed a little rushed but very theatrical. I wonder if having the background of billie wanting to be actor not a wizard/sorcerer would have the ending make more sense. Regardless, well done!!
Kennedi
ps the relationship between the dog and the main character was *chef's kiss* great.
Francisco
Great story! There is a lot of ideas and visual I really enjoyed. Well done! :)
Duane
Job well done! I was a bit confused as to why at first he enjoyed hanging out with his Grandma, then abandoned her. Unless it was his first time. The graphic drove the story. Good job. Great choice of audio.
Enkhee
I really enjoyed your story. Great job!
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BILLIE'S RITUAL
Billie is about to turn 11 years old and that means a lot in the guerrero family!
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
Special Thanks:
Team:
Pizza Planet Co.
Andrea, Manuela, Nicolás, Simon
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