Ava

I had been watching all your videos from the very beginning and I think you have approved a lot and have done a very good job.

Greer

This is a great submission! I love the bits of dialogue you added and how much work you put into the art. Some of the sound effects are a little too loud and drown out the voiceover but overall I really enjoyed your story.

Ben

I really liked the basic structure of this story, but I found it to be a bit all over the place. Like at first, it's about Jonathon being scared of losing his family, but then he does lose his family and tries to become stronger because of it, but then he becomes mean and a borderline criminal because of his rage, before becoming nice out of nowhere with very little motivation. It's not bad, far from it, it just kind of felt like everyone on your team wanted to take the story in different directions, and you just merged all ideas into one. I still liked it, though.

Also, that lizard thing on the thumbnail is horrifying and I don't know if I like it or not.

Sanne

I have been following you since the very beginning and I think the final project turned out really well! Great job.