Joshua

Very creative storytelling through Poetry. Images worked well with the narrative and voice was excellent. Great job.

Samantha

I really like your story idea, it's very intriguing and gets my brain thinking! I think someone who has issues with getting distracted easily (such as someone with ADD) could really relate to your characters. The end was a little hard to follow due to no narration or dialogue but I think this story has a lot of potential so you should continue developing it after this course is finished for sure!

Duane

As an ex-Trumpet player I love the music. What is this composition and where can I get a copy?

Christopher

Hi Duane, I'm glad you liked the music. I should have credited the musicians that I found on Youtube Audio Library. It's a band called "The Westerlies" and the two songs are called "Dover" and "Hard Times Come No More". Here's there youtube channel if you want to hear more: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCoIyoWuQx_Ga7fQ35flEmQA

Duane

I love your graphic way of telling the story. I kinda sorta feel like the narrator abandoned us near the end of the story. The viewer had to fill in the void themselves. I believe the Greeks considered the whole world is a stage, and everybody plays a part. I know the Corporate stage play, I escaped it to go full circle back to my dream of being an artist and partnering with the bird of creativity!

Christopher

Very creative! The concept took me a while to figure out, but I get it now.
Great job!