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Gael
Good moral and story!
Josie
The only thing I would fix is talk in a more enthusiastic voice or talk using a different voice in each picture. Everything else was great!
Tanner
What can i say exepct it something that i'd laugh and enjoy and yet somehow resinated with. This story the frames they everything work well for the modern kid to help explain kept me enterianed.. LOVE IT!!
Quang Khai
it is really good
Cam
This story has a good morale, and is very deep, but it is a little hard to hear because I could not hear the voiceover at points. Also, the music was a bit distracting.
Nikitha
Interesting story and good moral. However, the audio was slightly unclear because the music was a bit distracting, and I could not really understand aspects of the boy's power in some places.
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