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Averie
Good pictures. Good speaking.
Kyleigh
I love enemies to lovers! also, I love the anime-type style you have with your art!
Keith
I liked the art style and the story was interesting too.
Natalie (1 like)
so good! i love the story!
Quang Khai (1 like)
it is really good
William (1 like)
I liked the art style. I am unclear as to why the dude holds such a grudge. I think more backstory could help.
Teagan (1 like)
SO GREAT!! Love the story line!
Prachi (1 like)
I like your story and the drawings were very detailed! One thing I suggest is maybe adding dialogue, not just narrating what the characters are saying. But overall great job!
Kylie (1 like)
I really like how detailed your story was. I loved your art work and your story line. I think you did a nice job on the story line. The only thing I would suggest is to make your words a little more clear.
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Her soulmate was her enemy
apologizes if the video is too long as I was creating this stories there have been some scenes I had to remove or change in order for my story to make a little sense. Overall here is a small love story of two high school students that were enemies but later became lovers.
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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