Andres

I would like to see mor art and draws but is a interesting way to talk about the tale.

Gabriel

Hello Team Creators! I think this is a great start for your story and I hope you develop it more! Your character has an interesting personality and journey to face and one specific aspect that stood out to me was the one about " not only having social walls but being proud of them". This is a really unique take on the socially anxious character that has to work through their anxiety! Investing in this would make your character's journey even harder, which is good, and make your character more complex. Their internal struggle would be to mutually break down their walls while also letting go of the pride, which can make for a very interesting story and character moments. One thing that was unclear to me was how being a true crime enthusiast relates to this character's story and/or journey. It's important that all details add to the core of your story or character so really consider how this element of this character's personality can support your theme.

Desiree

Good Job!