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Jackie
I really love your story boarding style. You are able to express the characters very well & know how to create fun character movement. I liked the sound of the school, and immediately felt excited, but also a little nervous for the character. I liked the subtle interaction & character development. When Aaron introduced himself, it was a fun surprise, to see that he was a character just like her. So good job. I wish you well in your future endeavors & hope we can all continue to grow in creativity & find ways to share & uplift the world. Kind regards from the Isles of the Sea, jAckie =)
Manuela
Hey there, I found it very interesting that a wolf is allowed to go to a human school as a student. I am intrigued to know more about this world. I hope you finish your story even after the class is over because I have the impression this is only act 1, which by the way looks very fun. Good luck!
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First Day of School
