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Evan (1 like)
The art was very good. At 47 seconds I could hear the background noise of the new pinochio movie saying "Father when can leave to be on my own." Good work keep it up
Emilia (1 like)
Thanks for noticing! I thought no one would XD
Angel (1 like)
i like the art
Hazel (1 like)
The Visuals, audio, were so good! I loved this story so much!
Sophia (1 like)
Haha wow the art is amazing! Nice added sound affects to add to the atmosphere, especially the undertale songs. AND THE PINNOCHIO REFERENCE MintyFresh you great person. Hilarious and greatly relatable protagonist.
Emilia
THANK YOU I THOUGHT NO ONE WOULD NOTICE
Bryce (2 likes)
The art is spectacular, It instantly drew me in with its eye catching visuals. Though the story is lacking clarity and character growth. Collin’s character growth happens in a instance with no internal conflict.
Kevin (1 like)
I like the drawing but would look better with some colouring but it is great
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