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More than Survival (wip 2/3)
Sorry for any missing dialogue or like the switching between subs and voice, I reviewed the audio I recorded and though “there’s no way I’m putting this on the web” but I couldn’t record new lines so that’s,, my solution.
This is only the first and second act but I’m fairly happy with it now, I just wanna work on it more over the summer.
Special thanks to my man Ethan who went over it with me for critiques that didn’t end up getting implemented yet, and Mrs. M for finding and signing me up for this program.
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Team:
The caterpillars
Blessing, Cori, Jayda, Marlene
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