Madeline

This was a very relatable and interesting story. The perspective shot were also very impressive! Great work! :)

David (1 like)

I love the amount of emotion in each drawing giving just enough detail to feel what the character is enduring themself. The way she sits on the toilet to avoid looking at themselves in the mirror, the jumble of thoughts flying through her head as she stares at herself in the mirror, THE EMOTION WHEN SHE LOOKS AWAY FROM THE SPOON!!1 and maybe the frustration from the repeated cycle of trashing paper? (Not sure if I understood that on correctly). I love the shot of her head poking through the little hole to the attic at the top of the ladder, creative transition and good curiosity face. I was a bit confused why she looked around so sneakily when she was in the attic. Is she not allowed in the attic? Does she think her grandmother is hiding something? I love the bit of her surprised to see a different version of herself in the mirror, although I was wondering if maybe this was a metaphor for discovering new things about herself? Like does the mirror change the way you see yourself or is it like a magic mirror? I would have loved more about her exploring her evil(ish) side and learning to love herself more? I'm sure with more time these drawings would have been much more polished as you are a fantastic artist. I encourage you to keep up the good work, and since you said you enjoyed the process, I would recommend using text to speech tools in the future. They are a good substitute if you aren't comfortable using your voice and they really eliminate a lot of confusion in the story. Amazing Job!

Greer

I loved your music choice towards the end! I think a voiceover could've helped develop the story a little more, it's hard to tell what's happening in some of the scenes. Sometimes I like to ask a friend if they can tell what's going on in my drawings, so I know it will be clear to an outside observer. I hope you find time to make the rest of the story!

Sugey

I had no idea as to what was going on because there was no audio to video to help to develop the story.

Adinnah

I liked your story and the drawings, although it could have some more dialogue in it. Overall great job!

Dylan

I had no idea as to what was going on because there was no audio to video to help to develop the story.

Kyla

I could follow the story with the pictures. I could not get any sound until later in the video. I agree that it needs some dialog. I like how you used the storyboard idea.

Aneiss

Good idea, just needs some dialogue

Hazel

I liked the story, but I feel music or dialogue would make it flow so much better, the art style was amazing, and You did really well!

Elina

I like the idea and story but I wished there was dialogue or background music to help the story along.